![]() ![]() It also seems to need an editor, as the author's presumed gender and age shows through many times. It smacks of "first novel", overwritten in some parts (slow in the beginning around things and people that don't end up meaning much in my view, and weirdly descriptive about New York in negative ways that are curious) and jumping from one setting to another in a confusing way-how does the main character get robbed on a train without any description of how it happened when we are supposed to believe she is facile with self defence soon after? There are no real plot spoilers below, though I do point at some specifics in this review. ![]() This would be a good, solid book with a nice plot and character development, if it weren't about a teenaged girl. ![]()
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